After I graduate from senior high school, I decide to go to an English-speaking country. There are some reasons that I do this decision. First, living in an English-speaking country can help me improve my oral ability so that I can talk with others in English fluently. Second, I’d like to know the cultures between an English-speaking country and my hometown. This makes me not to offend people whose cultures are different from mine. Third, there is much welfare for students in an English-speaking country, such as America
This makes me not to offend people
回覆刪除make不是+原形嗎?
然後前面兩句是不是要用過去式阿?
After I graduate"d" from senior high school, I decide"d" to go to an English-speaking country.
回覆刪除應該是這是樣吧?
This makes me not to offend people 怪怪的@@
do this decision 的動詞不知道對不對
回覆刪除可以改成make
以上^_^
你是綠色的西瓜嗎?
第一句感覺像是妳已經畢業了耶...
回覆刪除This makes me not to offend people whose cultures are different from mine.
make後面要+原型噢~~
This makes me not to offend people whose cultures are different from mine.
回覆刪除裡的 to offend 我會刪掉 to
以上~
This makes me not to offend people
回覆刪除make後面是加原形吧!
除了＂make +Vr＂之外，
回覆刪除應無明顯錯誤。
1.There are some reasons that I do this decision.
回覆刪除﹡do→make
2.This makes me not to offend people whose cultures are different from mine.
﹡to我會刪調。
以上，淺見…
There are some reasons that I do this decision我覺得寫There are some reasons why I make this decision會比較好
回覆刪除I’d like to know the cultures between an English-speaking country and my hometown應該是想了解文化之間的差異吧?
以上