Discussing effects--2--revised

A new factory in Acton may bring some positive effects to this small town. There are some benefits I think it would bring to this town. First, it may offer more jobs to the residents. Therefore, they can earn much more money and the young persons don’t need to leave their hometown to find jobs. Second, it may cause economic prosperity to the town and lead Acton to success. Third, this may bring many tourists in Acton, and Acton may become a famous site that everyone knows. Because of these reasons, I consider that Action may have a wonderful future if the factory opens.