2011年4月6日 星期三

How to plan a party

It is very easy to plan a wonderful party for your friends. First, you have to check the guest list and then contact friends whom you would like to invite to make sure that who will be able to attend this activity. Second, make sure where you can hold the party and start to make a list that record what you should buy, such as, dessert, juice, wine, and so on. After you have made sure everything, you can send a inviting card to all of your friends who you wants to invite. Following thses tips, you will have a good time with your friends in your party.

9 則留言:

  1. Second, make sure...make a list that record...
    問一下喔,"record" 需不需要用被動語態?

    After you have made sure everything,...我可能會寫
    After you have made sure that everything is done,

    ...you can send a inviting card to all of your friends who you wants to invite.
    →"a"應該要改為"an"。
    →"who"應該要改成"whom"。
    →"wants"應該要去掉"s"。

    Following thses tips,...
    "thses"!? 是"these"吧。

    抱歉。只挑了錯字,沒什麼建設性意見…

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  2. 不會呀!!
    超有幫助的說~~~

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  3. you can send a inviting card to all of your friends who you wants to invite.
    如果是發給你全部的朋友..
    那邀請函應該不只有一張吧:D

    Following thses tips,
    這句的these拼錯摟~~

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  4. you can send a inviting card to all of your friends 這邊是不是要inviting cards?

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  5. 恩~~~~
    真是太粗心了!!!!
    呵呵~~

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  6. thses錯字?
    其他應該沒了(吧

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  7. After you have made sure everything, you can send a inviting card to all of your friends who you wants to invite. 這裡want沒有s喔!!
    (好感動,看你這麼多篇終於有個比較大點的錯誤可以讓我糾正了><)

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  8. you can send a inviting card to all of your friends who you wants to invite.
    裡的who我會寫whom
    還有wants 沒有S喔!
    Following thses tips
    裡的thses是these
    ((看來你打的很快喔!XDD

    以上!
    大發啦!

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  9. 感覺第一點和最後一點有點衝突到
    應該是先有發送要請卡
    才能確認有誰要參加
    (個人意見)=ˇ=

    剩下錯字的部分
    就上面提到的那些了~

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