2011年4月27日 星期三
Comparing-1
There are many identical points which are found on their licenses between Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friendman. They have the same eye color which are brown. And they also have black hair which is very beautiful. Brooks is the same age as Friendman. Furthermore, their birthdays are on July 31th, 1981. Besides, Brooks is as tall as Friendman, and both of them are 5' 3". It is really uncommon that two persons have so many alike parts.
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我看不到錯誤耶:D
回覆刪除There are many identical points ... between Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friendman.
回覆刪除是＂Friedman＂才對。
They have the same eye color which are ...
＂color＂要加＂s＂吧，因為後面是＂are＂。
It is really uncommon that two persons have so many alike parts.
＂persons＂→＂people＂。
不確定＂alike＂的用法對不對，
我可能會寫＂similar＂。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
They have the same eye color which are brown
回覆刪除color要加s
It is really uncommon that two persons have so many alike parts.
two people吧!
1.They have the same eye color which are brown.
回覆刪除→They have the same eye colors which are brown.
2.And they also have black hair which is very beautiful.
→And they also have beautiful black hair.
(因為前句已用了一次關代，所以這邊我會想這麼改…)
3.Furthermore, their birthdays are on July 31th, 1981.
→Furthermore, their birthdays were on July 31th, 1981.
4.It is really uncommon that two persons have so many alike parts.
→It is really uncommon that two persons have so many (parallel parts)/similarities.
(以上，淺見…)
eye color which are brown
回覆刪除color應該要s吧
其他...
對不起我眼殘實在看不出來(告非
They have the same eye color which are brown.
回覆刪除裡的 color 我會+S!
以上~
same eye color which are brown color沒加s動詞卻用are
回覆刪除two persons是people
They have the same eye color which "are" brown.
回覆刪除是is吧~
alike的用法怪怪的，我上網查也找不到做前位修飾的用法，這可能要問一下老師。
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