2011年4月20日 星期三

Giving reasons

There are a great variety of holidays within a year. Among them, Chinese New Year is my favorite. It is because I can have a big dinner with my family and we uaually feel happy and laugh a lot when we share some interesting things happened around us. Also, we children can get red envolopes with much money inside from our parents and grandparents. I often save these money in the bank to prevent a rainy day. Besides, we always go on a trip during this long holiday and have a lot of fun. After the trip, I often feel that I am full of energy to face the challenges in the next year. Chinese New Year always makes perfect memory for me.
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  1. 妤如2011年4月23日 清晨7:32

    It is because I ... and we uaually...when we share some interesting things happened around us.
    ＂uaually＂→＂usually＂。
    ＂some interesting things＂→
    ＂something interesting＂（應該可以吧？）

    Also, we children can get red envolopes...
    是＂envelopes＂。

    Chinese New Year always makes perfect memory for me.
    不確定可不可以用＂makes＂，
    在下提議＂brings me a perfect memory＂。


    新年很讚。

    如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。

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  2. 芳珠2011年4月27日 晚上11:15

    when we share some interesting things happened around us.
    可改成something interesting
    red envolopes 紅包打錯了

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  3. 姜姜(21)2011年5月4日 清晨7:05

    usually跟envelopes拼錯了，
    其它的沒什麼問題。

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  4. 孟萱2011年5月4日 晚上10:58

    envelopes拼錯摟

    我也最喜歡新年了哈

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  5. 姚薇...愛慘珉玗了!!!2011年5月4日 晚上11:06

    It is because I can have a big dinner with my family and we uaually feel happy and laugh a lot when we share some interesting things happened around us.
    裡的uaually 是usually吧!
    還有妳的and有兩個...唸起來很饒舌..
    we children can get red envolopes
    裡的envolopes 是envelopes喔!

    以上~
    辛苦了!
    我喜歡的只有紅包啦XDD

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  6. 篔簹2011年5月4日 晚上11:06

    uaually?
    是usually嗎

    然後envolopes
    是envelopes吧

    應該就沒了

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  7. 亭安2011年5月4日 晚上11:41

    we "uaually" feel happy and laugh a lot
    是usually

    red envolopes
    是envelopes

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  8. 冠伶2011年5月5日 清晨7:30

    1.It is because I can have a big dinner with my family and we uaually feel happy and laugh a lot when we share some interesting things happened around us.
    →It is because I can have a big dinner with my family; we usually feel happy and laugh a lot when we share something interesting happened around us.
    (big dinner我會想換成nosh-up或feast呢…)
    2....we children can get red envolopes with...
    →...we children can get red envelopes with...
    3.I often save these money in the bank to prevent a rainy day.
    →I often bank the money for a rainy day.
    (由於妳的文章幾乎沒錯誤了…所以我就分享一下個人習慣，我覺得這麼寫就可以表達句意了呢…)
    4.Chinese New Year always makes perfect memory for me.
    →In the long run, Chinese New Year always makes perfect memories for me.
    (印象中memory當回憶時可數，當記憶時不可數…)
    (以上，淺見…)

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