2011年4月27日 星期三
Comparing-2
There were many similar parts of John Adams and Thomas Jefferson's lives. They both played important roles in American Revolution. John Adams was the delegate to the Continental Congress, and so was Thomas Jefferson. Besides, both of them were the singers of Declaration of Independence. And, they also studied and practiced law. Moreover, they were presidents of United States once before. Exactly, they died on the same day on July 4, 1826. It was really sad that we lost two important person in this world within a day.
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Besides, both of them were the singers of Declaration of Independence.
回覆刪除singers要改成signers哦
他們不是歌手啦XDDDDD
They both played important roles in American Revolution.
回覆刪除played an important role 好像是固定用法? 記得之前有問過老師......
It was really sad that we lost two important person in this world within a day.
person應該改people喔~~
1.Besides, both of them were the singers of Declaration of Independence.
回覆刪除→Besides, both of them were the signers of Declaration of Independence.
2.It was really sad that we lost two important person in this world within a day.
→It was really sad that we lost two important persons/people in this world within a day.
(以上，淺見…)
singers 拼錯了喔
回覆刪除然後沒了(啥鬼
Besides, both of them were the singers of Declaration of Independence.
回覆刪除裡的 singers 是 signers 喔!
It was really sad that we lost two important person in this world within a day.
裡的 person我會寫 people耶!
以上~
two important person 是people哦
回覆刪除It was really sad that we lost two important "person" in this world within a day.
回覆刪除是people
They both played important roles in American Revolution.
回覆刪除建議＂played an important role＂，
因為據說是固定用法。
＂singers＂→＂signers＂。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
我有個問題...
回覆刪除最後一句，為什麼不能用person?加s不就好了?