2011年5月25日 星期三

Expressing an Opinion--1

Using nuclear power to solve the energy crisis is a popular way in many countries. Although many people think that is a good idea, I strongly believe that there are many disadvantages of using nuclear power. First, it might pollute the environment around us, and some creatures might be extinct. We have only one earth, so we have to do our beat to protect it. Second, nuclear power is dangerous that might cause radiation leak if we use it carelessly. Once the radistion leaks, we might face many throny situation.  Finally, it is harmful to our health because it might result in pathological changes of our bodies. What's worse, it might take people's lives away. According to these reasons above, I don’t agree to use nuclear power to solve the energy crisis.

8 則留言:

  1. so we have to do our beat to protect it.
    是do our best

    it might take people's lives away
    應該是lifes

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  2. 除了we have to do our beat 拼錯之外沒什麼問題

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  3. Once the "radistion" leaks
    這邊打錯了!

    many "throny" situation
    是thorny嗎?

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  4. so we have to do our beat to protect it.
    裡的beat 是best喔!

    以上~
    我喜歡這句"We have only one earth, so we have to do our beat to protect it."
    完全的同意
    幫妳+1
    XD

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  5. Although many people think that is a good idea,
    "that"後面是不是要加"it"?

    We have only one earth...
    在下偏好"only have"...
    "beat"錯字。

    Second, nuclear power is dangerous that might cause radiation leak... 在下想寫:
    "...nuclear power is so dangerous that it might
    cause radiation leak..."

    Once the radistion leaks, we might face many throny situation.
    →"radiation"。
    →"thorny"。

    改的部份很多都是私心……

    如有誤,請不吝嗇指教。

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  6. 拼字注意一點就好。

    (以上,淺見…)

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  7. Although many people think that is a good idea,
    這句that後面要有一個it噢

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  8. do our beat
    應該是do our best?

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