Meeting people through online dating sites becomes more and more popular in this E generation. It is often argued that making friends by the online dating sites sometimes is dangerous. However, I think that meeting people through these sites has many advantages. First, it is really interesting to chat with people from different families, or even countries, on these sites. I can learn more difference between different cultures. Second, it is making friends on the sites that is really exciting for me. Sometimes I can know some famous people through the sites. Finally, I can also learn some new information from those people which makes me broaden my knowledge. To sum up, it is a good idea to meet people through online dating sites.
it is making friends on the sites that is really exciting for me.
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which makes me broaden my knowledge
這邊的make不用s吧!
by the online dating sites用through好像比較好吧
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I can learn more "difference"
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it is making friends on the sites
回覆刪除這裡用ING不太對吧...
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It is often argued ...sometimes is dangerous.
回覆刪除在下覺得＂sometimes＂跟＂is＂要掉換一下。
＂it is making friends on the sites that is really exciting for me. ＂
就喜歡這句ˊˇˋ
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教喔。
Finally, I can also learn some new information from those people which makes me broaden my knowledge.
回覆刪除這句的makes不用+s哦^^
it is making friends
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