2011年5月18日 星期三
Comparing--3
They are two similar teachers I know in our school. One is Lily, and the other one is Vicky. Both of them teach English, and they are both working hard. They have the same constellation, Sagittarius, so they have similar personalities. Both of them like to help those who are in need. Also, they are graceful and kind to everyone. It's really uncommon to see that two persons from different families are so similar.
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應該沒什麼問題
回覆刪除但是感覺一直出現both 可以換個詞~~
:D
沒有錯(呵欠
回覆刪除沒有錯的我都不知道要怎麼改@@
沒有錯誤，不過建議可以換換各種不同句型，全篇出現太多both囉…
回覆刪除在下找不到要修改的地方呢……
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they are both working hard改成they both work hard會不會比較好
回覆刪除沒有錯誤~
回覆刪除找不到錯誤的地方耶~~~
回覆刪除棒:D
重複的字不要太多更好^^