2011年4月27日 星期三

Describing a person--revised

Excuse me. I'd like to find a person. We are the tourists from Taiwan, and one of my friends, Fabian, gets lost. He is a tall and thin boy with big eyes and straight short blond hair. He is about one hundred and seventy-five centimeters. He wears a blue shirt and jeans, and he also wears glasses. We were separated at the MRT station in Tokyo. If you see this boy, please call me instantly. My phone number is 0911111111. Thank you very much.

Comparing-2

    There were many similar parts of John Adams and Thomas Jefferson's lives. They both played important roles in American Revolution. John Adams was the delegate to the Continental Congress, and so was Thomas Jefferson. Besides, both of them were the singers of Declaration of Independence. And, they also studied and practiced law. Moreover, they were presidents of United States once before. Exactly, they died on the same day on July 4, 1826. It was really sad that we lost two important person in this world within a day.

Comparing-1

There are many identical points which are found on their licenses between Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friendman. They have the same eye color which are brown. And they also have black hair which is very beautiful. Brooks is the same age as Friendman. Furthermore, their birthdays are on July 31th, 1981. Besides, Brooks is as tall as Friendman, and both of them are 5' 3". It is really uncommon that two persons have so many alike parts.

2011年4月20日 星期三

How to plan a party _Revised

It is very easy to plan a wonderful party for your friends. First, you have to check the guest list and then contact friends whom you would like to invite to make sure that who will be able to attend this activity. Second, make sure where you can hold the party and start to make a list that record what you should buy, such as, dessert, juice, wine, and so on. After you have made sure that everything is done, you can send inviting cards to all of your friends whom you want to invite. Following these tips, you will have a good time with your friends in your party.

Giving reasons

There are a great variety of holidays within a year. Among them, Chinese New Year is my favorite. It is because I can have a big dinner with my family and we uaually feel happy and laugh a lot when we share some interesting things happened around us. Also, we children can get red envolopes with much money inside from our parents and grandparents. I often save these money in the bank to prevent a rainy day. Besides, we always go on a trip during this long holiday and have a lot of fun. After the trip, I often feel that I am full of energy to face the challenges in the next year. Chinese New Year always makes perfect memory for me.

2011年4月13日 星期三

Describing person

Excuse me. I'd like to find a person. We are the tourist from Taiwan, and one of my friend, Fabian, gets lost. He is a tall and thin boy with big eyes and straight short blond hair. We were separated at the MRT station in Tokyo. If you see this boy please call me instantly. My phone number is 0911111111. Thank you very much.

2011年4月6日 星期三

How to plan a party

It is very easy to plan a wonderful party for your friends. First, you have to check the guest list and then contact friends whom you would like to invite to make sure that who will be able to attend this activity. Second, make sure where you can hold the party and start to make a list that record what you should buy, such as, dessert, juice, wine, and so on. After you have made sure everything, you can send a inviting card to all of your friends who you wants to invite. Following thses tips, you will have a good time with your friends in your party.