2011年3月9日 星期三
A horrible experience
It was the most horrible experience that I had ever had. Last month, when I was on my way home after school, I found that someone was following me. At the beginning, I did not care about it, but when I started to run, he ran after me and caught me at the arm. I was scared so I began to scream as loud as I could. And I also dialed to the police station secretly at the same time. Unfortunately, the man found that and he was so angry that he tried to tie me up but I struggled intensely. Suddenly, the police car arrived, and the man was caught by the police. After this event, I became more carefully and prepared a whistle with me when I had to go home alone.
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I was scared so...as loud as I can.
回覆刪除"can"是不是要改成"could"?
請教一下,
Vicky是不是有說過,
像"caught my arm"這類句型,
可以寫成"caught me +介+ the arm"。
是嗎?
--好強喔。邊反抗還可以邊偷偷報警‥‥‥。
收到!!
回覆刪除已修改
p.s.因為我夠聰明呀!!
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
可以多描述當時的心情
回覆刪除然後怎麼解除困難
以後在遇到這種事的話可以怎麼辦 !!!!!!
喔!可是....
回覆刪除可以偷懶嗎.......
...你動作還真迅速...
回覆刪除為什麼可以一邊掙扎一邊報警阿?!
有點點違反常識了吧?
而且...
不是要分成revised版嗎?
你怎麼直接改...?!
既然是最恐怖的經驗
回覆刪除我覺得...
要再將那恐怖的地方描述的更清楚
像是那時的心情
心裡是怎麼想的等等
^^
哨子會不會只是配合學校規定?
回覆刪除哈哈哈哈哈哈XD
這是真實事件嗎?還是變態進階版?
回覆刪除如果是真的那也太恐怖了。
Suddenly, the police car arrived.這邊我覺得有點突然,可以多描述。
以上。