Future perspectives--revised

If I could enter this college, I hope that I could have more obvious progress in my English. I hope I will be able to communicate with foreigners with confidence. Also, I plan that I have to pass the advanced level of GEPT within the four years in college, which means I have a certain degree in English. In addition, I think I will do my best to get the chance to go abroad. By doing so, I can contact more foreign cultures and understand the differences among countries. Maybe one day I will become a diplomatist who helps our government to deal with important things in international. This is the dream that I have made since I was a little child and I consider it a job of glory which makes me feel proud of. Sincerely, I hope I can make my dream come true by the training in this college.