Expressing an Opinion--2

Meeting people through online dating sites becomes more and more popular in this E generation. It is often argued that making friends by the online dating sites sometimes is dangerous. However, I think that meeting people through these sites has many advantages. First, it is really interesting to chat with people from different families, or even countries, on these sites. I can learn more difference between different cultures. Second, it is making friends on the sites that is really exciting for me. Sometimes I can know some famous people through the sites. Finally, I can also learn some new information from those people which makes me broaden my knowledge. To sum up, it is a good idea to meet people through online dating sites.

Expressing an Opinion--1

Using nuclear power to solve the energy crisis is a popular way in many countries. Although many people think that is a good idea, I strongly believe that there are many disadvantages of using nuclear power. First, it might pollute the environment around us, and some creatures might be extinct. We have only one earth, so we have to do our beat to protect it. Second, nuclear power is dangerous that might cause radiation leak if we use it carelessly. Once the radistion leaks, we might face many throny situation.  Finally, it is harmful to our health because it might result in pathological changes of our bodies. What's worse, it might take people's lives away. According to these reasons above, I don’t agree to use nuclear power to solve the energy crisis.

Comparing--2--revised

There were many similar parts of John Adams and Thomas Jefferson's lives. They both played an important role in American Revolution. John Adams was the delegate to the Continental Congress, and so was Thomas Jefferson. Besides, both of them were the signers of Declaration of Independence. And, they also studied and practiced law. Moreover, they were presidents of United States once before. Exactly, they died on the same day on July 4, 1826. It was really sad that we lost two important persons in this world within a day.

Comparing--1--revised

There are many identical points which are found on their licenses between Stephanie Brooks and Ann Friedman. They have the same eye colors which are brown. And they also have beautiful black hair. Brooks is the same age as Friedman. Furthermore, their birthdays were on July 31th, 1981. Besides, Brooks is as tall as Friedman, and both of them are 5' 3". It is really uncommon that two people have so many parallel parts.

Contrasting--2

I am the principal of this school and now I am going to hire a new instructor for my school. There are two resumes from Lynn Whitnall and Debra Fines who are applying for the job, so I have to compare them and make a decision. First, Debra has  more education than Lynn. Although Debra has more employment experience than Lynn, Lynn masters more languages than Debra. In addition, Lynn has won a award while Debra doesn't. Also, Debra has published a book in 2006. After considering, I decide to hire Lynn Whitnall who I think is more suitable for this position.

Contrasting--1

I am a freshman in the college, so I have to find a house where I can live comfortably on my own. Now, I have found two houses which might be suitable for me, but I have to make a decision. One of them is in Fairfax which has two large bedrooms, and the other one is CAMPUS APRTS which has only one bedroom. The first one provides air conditioner, while the second one is near campus. And the first one is furnished, but the second one isn't. Though the first one offers more equipments than the second one, its price is higher. Also, I have a pet dog, Gigi, so, I think I would choose the CAMPUS APTS which is more suitable for me.

Comparing--3

They are two similar teachers I know in our school. One is Lily, and the other one is Vicky. Both of them teach English, and they are both working hard. They have the same constellation, Sagittarius, so they have similar personalities. Both of them like to help those who are in need. Also, they are graceful and kind to everyone. It's really uncommon to see that two persons from different families are so similar.

Giving reasons--revised

There are a great variety of holidays within a year. Among them, Chinese New Year is my favorite. First, I can have a big dinner with my family and we usually feel happy and laugh a lot when we share something interesting happened around us. Also, we children can get red envelopes with much money inside from our parents and grandparents. I often save these money in the bank to prevent a rainy day. Finally, we always go on a trip during this long holiday and have a lot of fun. After the trip, I often feel that I am full of energy to face the challenges in the next year. Chinese New Year always brings me a perfect memory.